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not wrong lol
yup what the bottom guy said make a buildup with some growls and make it bassier overall
i see modified of og lol
Is a sequel XDD
crazy music that cannot be comprehended
really good song, but honestly i wouldve removed some parts to make the song shorter 0:00 to 0:37, and 5:00 to 5:53.
From 2:57 to 3:49, i think you can make a totally different melodic line (i mean just change the repetition earlier) for the section.
overall good, scouted lol
ok ill be honest, I actually want to do a full review on this one. mainly because I feel the need to scout you.
0:00 to 0:20. At first it starts out fine, however eventually it gets too repetitive without new layers added. Not a bad intro though.
0:20 to 0:40. Pretty well made overall. The bass feels soft due to the louder drums, but not hugely horrible.
0:40 to 1:00. I find the transition at 0:50 there too sudden for me, could add a white noise riser.
1:00 to 1:20. now the buzzing of the chords feels too much, could tone it down slightly. The chords changes could try to have more power as well. Another way to make your chords have more power is to cut the sound out. For example, after a chord thing, u can use an automation to drop it to 0 and then back up again. Or you could simply just not hold the note until the next chord. You dont even need to do it every chord, you could alternate it and it would still sound good. Drums from 1:10 is a bit random imo, you could add a counter melody as well.
1:20 to 1:40 the growls or whatever you want to call it sounds really cool. Drums from 1:30, however might fit better if you use only one type of drum for the buildup.
1:40 to 2:00 growls might sound cool, however this ended up making this part slightly messy. The growls seem panned to the sides, wished it could be more of in the middle.
2:01 to 2:21 just another excellent part. wished at 2:11 u added a new instrument to counter the main.
2:21 to 2:41 good break from the rather loudness of the song.
2:41 to 3:01 same as 1:00 to 1:20 tbh
3:01 to 3:22 nice buildup right there, similar to 1:20 to 1:40.
3:22 to 4:02 abit repetitive, but still good
4:02 to 4:27 pretty good outro, just felt the 4:12 white noise effect felt strange as it was supposed to get softer and softer.
overall not bad, well done lol time to check ur other songs and see if u are scout worthy
the bass/sub bass makes the songs very distorted, in the end you end up only hearing subbass and abit of melody. can barely hear the vocal lol. kick subbass could be turned down to prevent it from being too powerful
too repetitive, can be made shorter into 3 mins. bass of piano at beginning could be softer. Adding some harmony with strings wouldve been good as well.
fyi gdash whitelisting artist requires robtop himself to whitelist you. Ive been making for over 2 years still no whitelist oof
thanks a lot! :)
i have seen the latest 2 songs, both seem to be similar loops in the whole track, some melodies dont really fit the bass. i recommend you to understand basic music theory which would heavily help you make much nicer sounding melodies.
once you get the hang of making good melodies and chord progressions, it would be much better.
dont give up
Thanks for the advice, I will defo use it!
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